Cross Country 2014
At the Cross Country I was puffing and blowing. My knees did a dance. My
heart was pumping fast. My legs were shaking.
By Lili H
Cross Country 2014
“Oh no! I fell over and hurt my hand!” I said to dad.
“Are you all right?”
Dad said.
I said, “Yes, but
it hurt my hand.”
Dad said, “What
hand?”
I sprained my
arm. I went to the hospital. The got a bandage on me. My family came to see me.
By Jade P
Cross Country 2014
The horn honked.
The races went ahead of me. I was behind but I didn’t cross the finish line.
By Harley
Cross Country 2014
We went to the cross-country. I came fifth. I just about got fourth. But
when I was close to the line someone over took me.
By Garett
Cross Country 2014
Salty sweat was dripping down my face like a tap turned on. I was
running as fast as I could go. I came third. Lily came first and Zoe came
second. I was happy.
By Jaz
Cross Country 2014
I felt nervous when I lined up. I scared when the horn went off. I was
puffing. My heart was beating. I was racing around the track.
By Cameron
Cross Country 2014
At cross-country
I was running fast. I came fifth.
“Wow!” said my
mum and dad, “You are good!”
When the horn
went off I tripped up and I got back up and kept going. I am brave.
By Bianca
Cross Country 2014
I was excited at cross-country. I was nearly first! I had salty sweat
dripping down my face like a tap turned on.
By Safi
Cross Country 2014
I won the
cross-country two years in a row. When I lined up at the star line my legs were
wobbling like jelly. When I won the cross-country my heart was beating fast.
By Millie
Cross Country 2014
I tried my hardest to come first at cross-country but I came second
last. It was tiring and exhausting. I felt like I was going to sleep. My guts
were twisting but I tried to run as fast as I could.
By Andre
Cross Country 2014
It was cross-country day. I was
lined up at the start line. I was very, very, nervous and my legs were
shivering. When the hooter went “boom” all of us went.
By Lily B
Cross Country 2014
By Becky
2 comments:
Wow! What awesome writing you have done. I am really proud of the great descriptions you have used! Nice work Jade P for using speech marks! Keep up the amazing writing team!
Miss McDonald
Great writing Room 2.. I am very impressed with your descriptions and I could picture your experiences from the words you chose. Becky, I was cheering for you and you did look exhausted!! (: Ms T
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