Speech Marks

We are learning to add speech to our writing.

“3,2,1,” said Miss McDonald, “onto the mat now.” We went down to the mat.

By Lucas

“Ahhhhh! I jammed my finger!” I cried. I cried and I cried. Blood dripped down my finger. “What happened?” said mum.

By Paige

“Yay! It’s my birthday!” I screamed in the morning. I raced to Mum and jumped on her. I was bouncing higher than a kangaroo.

By Safi

“Ouch!” I screamed as my Mum slamed the car door on my finger. Blood streamed down my middle finger. The nail almost came off. My finger was pumping like a bee.

By Theo

I screamed when Alyssa told me about the ghost. It jumped at her and tried to kill her she said to me. “Wow,” I screamed, “Is there really a ghost?”

“Yes,” she replied.

“Oh no!” I said.

By Becky

 “Pass the controller to me,” said my brother.

“NO! NO!” I said. I felt mad. My mum woke up.

“What is all that noise?” she asked.

“Flynn wants the controller. But I had it first!” I replied.

“Pass the controlled to me,” said mum.

“But I haven’t had a go,” said Flynn.

“Well your going to have to have a go tomorrow,” said mum.

“But you can have a go after school,” I said.

“Oh I can’t,” said Flynn, “Because we’re going up north.”

By Alyssa

“Aaahhhhh!” I screamed. The neighbours could hear me. I called my mum. Mum gave me a hug. I cried. Tears rolled down my face. My mum shouted at Jake, “Go to your room.”  My brother stomped to his room.  My finger was sore. It was bleeding. I got a sticky plaster.

By Lili H

“Ahh!” I screamed as Jade P sprinted towards me. He dived at me but I sprinted away. He hit his face on the grass but it didn’t hurt.

By Adam