Saturday, March 7, 2015

Amazing writing about EOTC week

My favourite bit of EOTC week was swimming in the lake. I got stuck in the hole. The hole was sticky.

By Maddi


POLICE STATION
I went the the police station. I went into the cell. I saw a ridiculous toilet. It had a hand basin on top.
By Odin


Webbs Orchard
Fort,
Children climbing and running around.
Chickens,
Pecking and scratching.
Sprinklers,
Spraying water on the ground.
By Travis


Police Station
I saw the taser. It was cool. The bed was hard.
By Anika



Police Station
I went to the police station. I saw the cell. A funny toilet was in there. There was a hand basin on top of the toilet.
By Amber



Police Station
Cells,
Made of concrete with funny toilets in them.
Road Spikes,
Popping people’s tires.
Baton,
Hitting people or smashing windows.
Finger prints,
Helping us to know who took something.
Handcuffs,
Locking Ariana’s hands together.
Taser,
Electrocuting people.
Pepper spray,
Spraying in people’s eyes.
By Summer.



Webbs Orchard
Dog,
Floating in the blue water.
Plums,
Turning red.
Chickens,
Clucking and eating.
Sprinklers,
Watering the trees.
By Yasmin




Webbs Orchard
Forklifts,
Stacking boxes of fruit in the cold room.
Cherry picker,
Lifting people in the air to pick the high fruit.
By Philip


Police Station
Road spikes,
Popping baddies tires.
Guns,
Small and black with tiny bullets.
Pepper spray,
Blinding people making them fall to the ground.
By Damien



Webbs Orchard
Sheep,
Running around getting chased by the dog.
Cherry picker,
Reaching up to pick the fruit.
Sprinklers,
Popping up out of the ground to water the roasting trees.
By Dominic





Webbs Orchard
Moffie,
Swimming in the blue dam and fetching sticks.
Hens,
Pecking and scratching the ground.
By Rowan





The Orchard Visit
Moffie was fetching the sticks in the water. The water was blue.
By Layton




EOTC WEEK
My favourite thing to do on Education Outside The Classroom is water play. This is what I did, I slid down lots of water slides. I also got put in the newsletter. If you were wondering why, don’t ask me because I don’t know why.
By Michala.



EOTC WEEK
I had fun at water sports and going to the BMX track. 
By Jordan

1 comment:

Jac School said...

I love your poems room 4. I particularly like Yasmin's .. where she said "Plums, turning red," i like that phrase.