Tuesday, April 5, 2016

Awesome writing

The Adventure
My friends and I were playing a game. We had a lot of fun playing the game then we went back to class.
By Nathan


Clouds flying in the sky. Sun sparkling in the sky too. Green leaves sparkling. Green sparkling grass. Worms squiggling and eating soil.Bird's singing a little song.
By Kirstyn


My school dog is called Rosie. She has long fur all over her body. She likes wagging her tail a lot. One time Rosie whacked my leg but it didn't hurt.   
By Kirstyn

John and Oli set off on an adventure to get a red deer. We saw one. We ran after it but it was to fast so we shot at it but we missed. But we shot one and gutted it and we took it home to eat.  
By John and Oli      

2 comments:

Amanda Gillespie said...

Awesome writing Nathan!! Well done xx

Selena said...

Cool story Oli & John!